
What if there were no walls
and the pretence of shapes
and the sounds of meaning
were lost
the control of living
in a private bubble of your life
how comfortable to swim
in just one ocean
where the tide of beings
rise and fall like breath
Poetry, spiritual, nature, oceans, love, trees
What if there were no walls
and the pretence of shapes
and the sounds of meaning
were lost
the control of living
in a private bubble of your life
how comfortable to swim
in just one ocean
where the tide of beings
rise and fall like breath
I too especially love those last two lines!
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Thanks Betty
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So very lovely, Dan! Those last 2 lines are like a mantra, calling in the best for 2022.
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Thanks Lynne. Wishing you the best for the year ahead as well. I’ve been meaning to congratulate you on poem you had published recently.
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Oh thank you, Dan! I appreciate that😊
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